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25 May 2003 @ 08:19 pm
*laughs* I've written more Beatles slash this week than I have in.. ever, so that's definitely a good thing that this community has inspired me so much. <3

I just wrote a short slash story, and it's George/Paul, and over all it's PG-13. I can't really think of a decent title for it, so I just call it "Snow." So tell me what you think of it.

The snow sparkled underneath Paul's feet; it was a purple-orange color now, because of the way the sunset was hitting it. He bent down and picked some up, and dropped it slowly from his fingers like a kind of powder. He jumped as someone behind him asked, "What're you doing, Paul?"

Paul stood up and turned around, facing his friend George. "Oh, nothing," he replied. He turned back around, shielding his eyes some with his hand from the light of the sunset. "It's really beautiful, isn't it?"

George shielded his eyes a bit too. "Yeah. It is. John and Ringo want to know if you want to come in and play cards with us."

Paul looked back down at the snow. "No, I don't think I will. I'd rather stay out here."

"It's cold out here... but okay, suit yourself. I'm going back inside now." George turned around, and Paul grinned, picking up more snow, and rolling it around in the palm of his hands. He threw it at George and managed to hit George's shoulder just as he was about to go inside.

George turned around quickly and grinned back at Paul. "Oh, you're going to get it..."

He picked up some snow and threw it back at Paul. Paul dodged it just in time. "Missed me!" Paul exclaimed, sticking his tongue out at George.

George had two snowballs in his hand just as Paul was saying this, and threw the first one, but waited before throwing the second one. The second one hit Paul's elbow. Paul fell down into the snow laughing.

George was still grinning. He looked at Paul. The sun was hitting his dark hair, and in a way it looked kind of reddish. Paul's smile seemed to light up his whole face.

"You know, it is beautiful," George said to him.

Paul looked up at him. "What does?" he asked, wondering whether George meant the sunset, or the snow, or both.

George walked over and kneeled down beside of Paul, and whispered, "You."

Yeah, not my best. "Love Me Tender" was definitely my best. But I'm okay enough with this one for it to be posted, so that's something.
George H.georgeh on May 25th, 2003 05:27 pm (UTC)
This is really sweet and soft. I like it. Very gentle, even with the snow fight. George is so tender. I love it. :)
x_holley_x on May 26th, 2003 02:58 am (UTC)
Thanks. :)
Becca the Wonder Penguinsunnyrea on May 25th, 2003 06:05 pm (UTC)
Well i like it! Its cute and sweet. Plus snow ball fights, no matter how short, are always fun. Gotta love the P/G
x_holley_x on May 26th, 2003 02:58 am (UTC)
Re: aw
Yep! Thanks.