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14 June 2003 @ 10:55 am
fabble - Dark Touches  
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“Paul?”. No reply. “Paul?”.


“Paul disappeared with the lights.”, he responded.


“Don’t be a twat.”, George said.


Paul giggled. “Come here, George. I’m scared.”


“You aren’t scared.”


“I’m afraid I’d like you closer.” There was a soft clang as George’s foot hit an instrument. “Right here.”, Paul said as his hand grabbed George’s shoulder clumsily.


“You know.”, George said. “You aren’t so cute in the dark.”


Paul took George’s hands and brought them up to his face. “I am, though. You’ve just got to look with your hands, silly.”, he said. George traced Paul’s eyebrows with each of his thumbs. “See? Silly boy.”


“Not completely hideous, I guess.”, George said.


“No?”, Paul asked as he slipped his fingers through the belt loops of George’s jeans and pulled him closer. “Not like you, anyway. You’re so hideous, I can’t stand it.”


George let his hands travel down Paul’s neck and chest. They slid around hips and met each other at the base of Paul’s spine, pulling them closer. “I know.”, he whispered.


Paul touched George’s face with the tips of his fingers. They trembled a little as they skimmed over his cheekbones and then again when they met his lips. “No, George. I really can’t stand it.”


“I know.”, George said. He took one of Paul’s hands in his own and kissed the palm. “I know.”, he whispered. “I can’t either.” He held their hands against his cheek and kissed Paul softly.


“Just don’t let go.”, Paul said.


“I won’t. I won’t.”

 
 
 
Dancing Piratesdancingpirates on June 14th, 2003 09:33 am (UTC)
Sometimes you just wanna hurt the word limit for fabbles, eh? Anyway, its lovely, i like it a lot ^_^
tf_anothergirl on June 14th, 2003 10:08 am (UTC)
I like the word limit actually. From the writer's perspective anyway. ;) LOL

Thanks for the review.
(Anonymous) on June 14th, 2003 11:23 am (UTC)
Very Sweet
This is SOOOO nice. Sweet, touching, lovable, hugable Paul & George!!!

Thanks for the delightful story.
George H.: George/Johngeorgeh on June 14th, 2003 12:13 pm (UTC)
Oh, TF! I absolutely adore this fabble! It's just . . . it's teasing and coy and at the same time so deep and sweet. I love the ending with George repeating "I know" over and over in agreement to whatever Paul says and nothing at all. It's just lovely. And I love George exploring Paul's beauty with his hands -- it's very powerful, especially for someone who uses his hands for his other love: guitar.

I also loved this line "slid around hips and met each other at the base of Paul’s spine, pulling them closer." Just a clever way of saying that, and very elegantly written. Very visual without being directly visual. Love it!

More like this please! <3
tf_anothergirl on June 14th, 2003 12:41 pm (UTC)
thanks
Such a nice review. This is all part of my plan you know... to convince you that George belongs with Paul. :)

p.s. What's <3 ? Paul's bum?
George H.georgeh on June 14th, 2003 02:02 pm (UTC)
Re: thanks
George/Paul is very lovely and I do enjoy it. But as much as I enjoy reading it I'll never be more convinced that it's better than John/George. Alas, that's the way of it. But you keep trying because I love reading it. :)

And <3 is actually a sideways heart. But it could very well be Paul's bum. LOL Which I guess would make <] George's bum, hmm? LOL
tf_anothergirl on June 15th, 2003 05:34 pm (UTC)
Re: thanks
Paul's got a heart shaped bum. :) George maybe <} little baby bum.

I'll keep trying. I'll just set my sights lower... You don't need to like it better, just enough to dabble from time to time.


Abbeyrd: the word is loveabbeyrd62561 on June 14th, 2003 02:51 pm (UTC)
TF very nice ....touching, exploring and it is enticing and arrousing.....Yes, Paul is the one that any of them belong with.....George and him cheeky at the begining and then as George/Sam said the belt buckle bringing them together .....mmmmm and then the I cant stand this , oh the torture .....sweet loving torture,very nice....I love the touching of the face. Your write our Paulie and George so well and yes, every one will be convince....lol...
Abbeyrd: the word is loveabbeyrd62561 on June 14th, 2003 02:52 pm (UTC)
forgot as much as P/G is lovely.....John and Paul is also fabulous....love them
THIS IS WARIO'S SPACE!vindaloo on June 14th, 2003 07:30 pm (UTC)
very coy....
Even though George didn't have a relationship with Paul in real life (He was tied up with two other Fabs) this is very sweet.
(George Harrison really did have a relationship with John Lennon and Ringo Starr! )
tf_anothergirl on June 15th, 2003 05:24 pm (UTC)
Re: very coy....
I appreciate the part about it being sweet anyway. As for the other propaganda... We all know George only had eyes for Paul. :)
(Anonymous) on June 15th, 2003 11:48 am (UTC)
To Vindaloo
Just curious - - is there anything specific that you base your comment on, that George "did have a relationship with John & Ringo"???
THIS IS WARIO'S SPACE!vindaloo on June 15th, 2003 07:19 pm (UTC)
Re: To Vindaloo
Yes, In fact, if you give me your E-mail address, I can E-mail you a fact sheet, not only with Ringo/George, George/John, but also it has John/Paul on it.