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18 February 2005 @ 02:18 pm

Hey y'all.

I am new to posting but I have been lurking for quite a while now. Very impressed with the naughtiness created here. Anyway, I am no stranger to Beatle fanfics...Into My Life defined high school for me. Go Tess! Also, I have a lengthy and quite embarrasing fic I wrote about me and Paulie when I was 17. But, slash is much more fun.

SO...I'm going to post a short drabble? I wrote while goofing off in Property Law today. I don't know anything about linking yet so bear with me.

Rated G for gorgeous george/paul (oh, and make no mistake I love my paulie; he just needs a kick in the pants on occasion.)

 Isn't it a Pity

At Twickenham--cameras, ugly lights, the whole bit. George hated it, but mostly because Paul's ego was sucking up most of the oxygen out of the space. Even when Paul was singing harmony to "I Me Mine", he didn't see it. He almost seemed happy that George was taking a stab at him. Completely oblivious. They'd had a row earlier that morning over George's playing. George hated to admit that Paul's opinion still mattered but it did. Too much. So despite the fact he knew it was a useless cycle, he leaned on sarcasm. "I'll play whatever you want me to play or I won't play at all. Whatever pleases you Paul."

Now they were on a break and Paul walked over, ostensibly to get some tea.  "Look George, like I said before, I'm not trying to get you you know."

George looked at him.  Really looked.  "Paul, I'm only going to say this once.  Maybe I should've said said something before.  You and John have been so busy one-upping eachother, you've forgotten there are other people around you.  People that care."  He said the last bit quietly, but boldly looking Paul in the eye.  "It used to be good for business," George grinned and bit his bottom lip.  "Hit records are good for everyone.  But now it just hurts."

"Ah c'mon George, we know your songs are good now."

"Yeah.  Good enough for two songs each go, right?  Jesus Paul, it's not about the songs."  It's about you.  "Paul, I know you're having a hard time right now, but you don't have to be so bitchy about it."

Paul flushed.  "I'm the bitch?  Have you been paying any attention?   John fucks off with her.  I'm the only one who gives a shit."  Christ.  George had to shut him up. Fuck the cameras.

He kissed Paul hard, stopping whatever else he had to say.  It was full of fury and six years of disappointment.

George stalked away in long strides.  "Yeah, you're the bitch."

The End

It's my first and was fun.  Thoughts? 


Current Mood: mischievousmischievous
Current Music: "Easter Parade"--Jump, Little Children
Little Monstaa: by: areleejensenlittle_monstaa on February 18th, 2005 08:51 pm (UTC)
hey, it was good! *loves George/Paul ^^*
I liked it :) I'm just angst-maniac, I guess :P
I just suggest you to post your stories under lj-cut instead of main page :)
mrsfjl66mrsfjl66 on February 19th, 2005 06:22 pm (UTC)
I heart the john tea cup pic
Thanks for the encouragement! How do I do what you suggested? Sorry, I'm an LJ dummy
Little Monstaa: by: areleejensenlittle_monstaa on February 19th, 2005 06:53 pm (UTC)
love it too :D
Don't worry, it's easy :)
just put this before the text:

*lj-cut text="inside these quotations you put the title"*

here you put your story


You just have to replace astericks with less than or greater than (<,>).
Hope it will help you :)
Stephanienoodle1017 on February 18th, 2005 09:08 pm (UTC)
Very good for your first. I really enjoyed reading it.
George/Paul is an uncommon pairing round' these parts.
mrsfjl66mrsfjl66 on February 19th, 2005 06:25 pm (UTC)
Y'all are all so sweet. I guess it's all the *LOVE* that's bein' created! And as for P/G...I just really wanted George to call paul a Bitch. It's always been a secret dream;)
theratman on February 19th, 2005 05:14 am (UTC)
I loved it. And I've got a weird kink for George/Paul, for some reason. Altho John/Ringo has a special place in my heart. ;) Hoping to see more from you, man.
mrsfjl66mrsfjl66 on February 19th, 2005 06:28 pm (UTC)
I am a Beatle love junky. I'm a total sucker for any pairing but P/G P/J (I know, I know) are my favorites. Perhaps it's just Paul is so yum yum. thanks for the shout out.
are you lookin' to get stabbed?mutantjules on February 19th, 2005 03:47 pm (UTC)
I LOVE it.
mrsfjl66mrsfjl66 on February 19th, 2005 06:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks Thanks Thanks. It was way fun. I'd never really written slash...just enjoyed y'all doing your excellent work. But now, you just never know...Man, George is hot. Sorry...stream of consciousness on that one.
Dizzy Miss Lizzyxlizx on February 19th, 2005 07:47 pm (UTC)
OoOooOooo Hohoho...Ho. >:P You tell him Georgie! XP Nicely done!
I have some of my own embarrassing Fan fics...there is no shame. no shame. :P And i will agree with you in saying that i love Paulie to bits, but he does need a swift kick in the pants sometimes XP.
mrsfjl66mrsfjl66 on February 20th, 2005 01:09 am (UTC)
I absolutely love the adorkable pic
Before I joined LJ and was just hanging around I saw your icon loved it:) then I had this really weird dream with Paul in huge dweeby glasses wich I think is directly attibutable to you. And yes Paulie does need a kick in his very lovely assets sometimes. I love the idea of George being a spiritually centered badass so I thought I'd try it.
Dizzy Miss Lizzy: Johnxlizx on February 20th, 2005 04:24 am (UTC)
Re: I absolutely love the adorkable pic
:D! I have two pictures like it, i will send/post them if you like in their full version :P
mrsfjl66mrsfjl66 on February 20th, 2005 06:14 am (UTC)
Re: I absolutely love the adorkable pic
Dizzy Miss Lizzyxlizx on February 20th, 2005 07:14 pm (UTC)
Re: I absolutely love the adorkable pic