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31 July 2003 @ 09:45 pm
Sorry I don't know what's gotten into me last week and this week, with these sad stories. Maybe next week I will make sure not to write something so sad. Sorry all. I guess I have been thinking of the present and past alot with the lads. Ok a title for this. Paul tried not to cry as he entered the room filled with light. He stiffed at the thin fraile man he loved under the covers, in a bed to big for him. He rented the house for Olivia and George, also for his own selfishness, so he could be more with his love. He had seen him grow weaker as time passed. Over the year no one had ever found out about them; life carried on with family, but there was always the get aways they would have. When george got sick, it became less; now only short visits were allowed. Olivia told him there wasn't much time left. He couldn't believe how brave his Georgie was. How he didn't fear death. He sat down next to him; gently running his fingers through the hair he loved so much. " I love you, I've always loved you." George stired, a small smile came as he saw his lover. "I too , death will never part us my love remember that" George rested his weak hand in Paul's. The tears came as they spoke of their love over the many years. It was time to go, Olivia announced. Paul kissed George good-bye, the kiss brought a spark to his eyes. "I'll see you tomorrow love." George nodded slowly as Paul left. He never did see George again for he died that night. Paul was crushed; he'd often sit under the stars meditating;that's when he felt George. That's when love filled his heart.
Current Mood: sadsad
kasey1964 on August 1st, 2003 07:07 am (UTC)
While My Guitar Gently Weeps
Oh Sue. That was so sad. I can picture how my Georgie looked and I can even see Paul's face. Great story.
Abbeyrd: within without youabbeyrd62561 on August 2nd, 2003 01:27 am (UTC)
Re: While My Guitar Gently Weeps
Hey you !!!!LOL you got here!!!!! thanks I am so glad you liked it. I thought that was you last week and now I know....good to see you here at LJ. Sorry the last two stories have been sad , just in that frame of mind .....SUe
(Anonymous) on August 2nd, 2003 01:47 am (UTC)
Re: While My Guitar Gently Weeps
Thanks Sue. I'm glad I got here also. Some of these stories are really good. The most touching ones are the ones where George was dying. I'll talk with you later. I'm depressed.


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psychedelicmess on August 1st, 2003 03:51 pm (UTC)
Sue, that's so unbelievably touching and sad :( Very well written though. nice job.

Rest in Peace, George...

Abbeyrd: within without youabbeyrd62561 on August 2nd, 2003 01:29 am (UTC)
Thank you Kristel. I have to start writing happier things though....LOL The last two have been very sad.....thanks again always good to hear from you . Email me I need to speak with you .....Sue
George H.georgeh on August 4th, 2003 08:04 am (UTC)
This is so sad and touching Sue, I can't even think about it. So, so sad. I'll have to write something light hearted and happy for the prompt next week. If you write another one like this I'll be a mess! LOL

Great job.
Abbeyrd: within without youabbeyrd62561 on August 4th, 2003 08:42 pm (UTC)
Thanks Sam, see I am using your mannip....lol.....I am sorry about the two sad stories lately, my mood I suppose and the last two were sort of in the present. I am glad you liked it and it was realistic....I will try to write a happy or silly fabble this week.....thanks Sam......love ya Sue